Hello there reader!
Welcome to my whale writing.
We have been learning how to write a recount .As year 6's we need to say who, why, what, where, when and how. They are told in first person (I) and are told in past tense.We have been focusing on using dialogue, emotions and strong vocabulary. we watched a video about a diver almost getting eaten or almost here is a link almost got Swallowed
Here is the interview that I wrote, imagining I was the diver and telling my recount of this experience.
Interviewer: What are you taking photos of before you got in the mouth of the whale?
Diver: I was taking photos of the sardines in the ocean because there was a sardine
run and we do the sardine run every so often or once a year in the sardine run
bryde's whale also sharks come and eat the sardines the bryde's whales a from south africa.
Interviewer: before the whale grabbed you, did you see coming towards you?
Diver:I was looking the other way then I looked back to take a photo of the sardine and
then suddenly I was in his mouth and I calmed down. I calmed down because I didn't want
to get eaten or swallowed. Then he spat me out.he spat me out because they are only able
to swallow a squid whole and not humans. We are way too big if that big sharp whale had
eaten me and then he/she could swallow me so I went back up and took a photo of the
whale so it was a big shock for me. The whale was big and amazing.
Interviewer: What has this experience taught you?
The experience taught me to stay calm. I can't get swallowed because I am too big
to fit down his throat but I will keep going to the ocean and will continue to take
lots more photos with the sardines and with a picture of the whale.
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